Your writing is compelling and I like your use of type-in stuff, as well as the animation you did, both add a lot to the game. I did get stuck one time when I had to type something in (the first one after you type your name), because I forgot what to type and then got stuck between the typing screen and the try again screen. It could be helpful to have another way back or a hint.
This is super interesting. I love the little animation that you have! I think if you add more art or images it'll really bring things together even more. The parts where you type to interact with the character are very engaging and fun.
this is such a cool concept! i love that you can add your name, it really sucks you in more. and also just to let you know i saw a typo where the bunny image is meant to be, but that's the only thing wrong i noticed. really cool so far!
I think this is a brilliant premise! I don't think I've ever seen games about that little space between player and character agency. I think you describe very well how strange it must be for the character to be controlled, which has interesting metaphorical implications, but also works as a "game about games". I definitely would like to see this expanded, fully featured visually and otherwise. Keep it up!
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I love the animation! The pacing is done very well. Maybe the writing could be a bit less cryptic, but overall, good work!
Your writing is compelling and I like your use of type-in stuff, as well as the animation you did, both add a lot to the game. I did get stuck one time when I had to type something in (the first one after you type your name), because I forgot what to type and then got stuck between the typing screen and the try again screen. It could be helpful to have another way back or a hint.
This is super interesting. I love the little animation that you have! I think if you add more art or images it'll really bring things together even more. The parts where you type to interact with the character are very engaging and fun.
this is such a cool concept! i love that you can add your name, it really sucks you in more. and also just to let you know i saw a typo where the bunny image is meant to be, but that's the only thing wrong i noticed. really cool so far!
I think this is a brilliant premise! I don't think I've ever seen games about that little space between player and character agency. I think you describe very well how strange it must be for the character to be controlled, which has interesting metaphorical implications, but also works as a "game about games". I definitely would like to see this expanded, fully featured visually and otherwise. Keep it up!
Right now this is good but you shuld add more choices so the player can get to the good ending.